Welcome to the first part of our last workshop! The previous peer critique session was a huge success so I’m looking forward to all the great feedback in this session.
Each novel opening has been pasted on its own page with its own comments section. Please leave your comments in the individual comments sections rather than on this page.
Feel free to share your opening page on Twitter, Facebook, etc. The more writers offering critiques the merrier! You do not have to be a Boot Camp participant to offer critiques.
This is the first part of the Workshop #4 critiques. The second part will be posted tomorrow. If you haven’t submitted yet, you can do so here.
Historical
Mainstream
On RVing Time A Grand Mexico Tour
Mystery
Thriller
SciFi
Romance
Young Adult
(Thriller) The Conductor
(Fantasy) Untitled
(Mainstream) The Journey
(Thriller) On the Other End of the Phone
(Fantasy) Andra of the Aki
(Mainstream) The Great Commission
(Thriller) Bendigo and Afolabi
Middle Grade
(Fantasy) The Lil Gods and the Rise of the Giants
Thanks to everyone for participating!
Ellen Brock 
I can’t seem to comment below the entries? There are no reply forms on the separate pages, or is it just me?
I am working on fixing this. Thanks!
I have tried posting commentsibn other people’s posts and cannot find a way to do so
I’m not sure why this happened. I am working on fixing it.
There is no comment section on the individual pages at the end of the book portions listed above. Where are we supposed to write our critique and are we supposed to include what we notice grammatically as well an overview? Thanks, this is my first time doing this.
I am working on fixing the issue with the comments. Thanks!
The comments are working for me now. Thank you!
Awesome! Sorry for the trouble!