Each novel opening has been pasted on its own page with its own comments section. Please leave your comments in the individual comments sections rather than on this page.
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This is the first part of the Workshop #4 critiques. The second part will be posted tomorrow. If you haven’t submitted yet, you can do so here.
(Thriller) The Conductor
(Mainstream) The Journey
(Thriller) On the Other End of the Phone
(Fantasy) Andra of the Aki
(Mainstream) The Great Commission
(Thriller) Bendigo and Afolabi
(Fantasy) The Lil Gods and the Rise of the Giants
Thanks to everyone for participating!