Novel Boot Camp – Lecture #19: How to Self-Edit

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This is it! The last day of Novel Boot Camp! How did it arrive so quickly?

It’s a bittersweet moment filled with visions of sleep and relaxation but also the knowledge that I won’t be hearing from you all nearly as often.

But Boot Camp isn’t over yet! Tomorrow I will announce the contest winners (I know you’re all dying to know who was the best genre guesser). So make sure to check out the post in case you’re a winner!

For our very last Novel Boot Camp lecture, I wanted to focus on the future – your novel’s future. Whether you simply read the lectures or spent hours on every homework assignment, chances are your novel still has a long way to go.

But its journey doesn’t stop here! It’s time to dig deeper into the perilous activity of self editing. It’s a long and rough road, but you’re ready for it! Here are my best tips:

Start with the Big Picture

Most writers start the editing process off on the wrong foot right from the get go. They open their word document to page one and just dive right in. They spend countless minutes debating about whether his shirt is “baby blue” or “light blue.” They fiddle with punctuation marks. They flip-flop endlessly between using “and” or separating the sentence into two.

And then after all of this, they go back and read their revision and it’s…just okay.

This kind of teeny-tiny detail-oriented editing is the absolute last thing you should worry about. Polishing the tiny details before focusing on the big picture just makes it more difficult to let go of unnecessary scenes down the road.

Always start with the big picture and work your way smaller.

The First Editing Stage: Content

The first thing to focus on with your novel is the content. Read your novel from beginning to end and take notes. Be as thorough as possible in your note taking, but don’t change anything just yet. The key is to not waste time making changes until you are 100% sure that the scene will be kept.

Here are some things you will want to include in your notes:

  • Chapters that are boring, slow, or feel unnecessary.
  • Plot holes.
  • Inconsistencies.
  • Unbelievable character motivations.
  • Chapters or scenes without conflict.
  • Poorly conceived or missing character arcs.
  • Any ideas you have for improvements – big or small.

You may need to go over this list several times, expanding on your notes, before you begin making changes within the novel.

Even if you’re a discovery writer (aka a “pantser”), an outline at this stage in the game can really help you see the big picture and figure out how to move scenes and make cuts and additions. Solidifying any plot changes in an outline before revisions can save you a ton of time and stress in the long run.

After you do make the changes within the novel, you will want to do this process again. Go through your manuscript a second time and make notes without changing anything within the manuscript. Then assess your notes, make an outline or game plan, and do another round of editing.

Note that I call this an “editing stage,” not an “editing round.” Depending on the writer, you could go through this process 2-5 times and still have areas to work on.

Note also that the first round of content editing may be very close to rewriting the book from scratch, especially if you’ve learned of some major issues with the plot during your first round of note taking.

The Second Editing Stage: Style

After you’ve perfected the story, it’s time to move on to style or “voice.” If your voice is strong already, then this stage might not take as long for you, but if you’re still establishing your style, this stage could involve a lot of rewriting.

The easiest place to start is with a scene that you feel best demonstrates the style or voice you want for the novel. Consider carefully which elements of the writing you like best.

Now choose a scene in which you feel that the writing isn’t particularly strong. Try to “imitate” the voice/style you used in the passage that you do like. Keep fiddling until you get the writing to a place where you are happy with it.

If you don’t have any scenes with especially strong writing, it may be helpful to rewrite the same scene several times in different styles. Then choose the style that you feel best suits the book and incorporate that style throughout the novel.

It may take several rounds of editing to get the style solid and consistent.

The Third Editing Stage: Line

Line editing is what most writers think when they hear the word “editing.” This is the last stage of the editing process where the writer moves slowly and deliberately from sentence to sentence and paragraph to paragraph making the language exactly what they want it to be.

A lot of writers and editors would lump the “style” and “line” editing as a single stage, but in my experience, when new writers are editing for the first time, their work is often so far from having a consistent style that an ordinary line edit would send them through their novel two dozens times before they’d settle on a style that suited their writing and the book.

It’s easier to establish your style ahead of time, then move through the book for the little things – cutting adverbs, improving emotional expression, rewording sentences that are clunky or unclear, etc.

If you’ve done the other two editing stages correctly and thoroughly, this stage might only take two rounds of editing.

How Do You Know When You’re Done?

Knowing exactly when editing is complete can be tricky. The biggest obstacle in the path of most writers is their thought process. Here are some particularly common and damaging ones:

  • “My agent/editor will fix this issue later.”  – Many writers are disillusioned about exactly how much work an agent or editor (at a publisher, not freelance) will be willing to do for you. They expect the novel to be pretty dang close to book store ready. Agents/editors have the pick of the litter so they have no motivation to work with you on a book that’s anything less than stellar.
  • “I need to get published right now! I need to see my book in stores!” – Hold your horses! Urgency is a huge factor in sloppy writing and editing, which will get you nowhere (see above). Don’t worry about when your book will hit shelves, worry about making it the best darn story you can make it.
  • “I’m naturally gifted and don’t need to work as hard as others.” – I can pretty much guarantee that this is not the case. Writing and editing is hard work for everyone. If you try to cut corners because of a belief that you are inherently gifted or talented, you’re going to be waiting the rest of your life for someone to recognize your brilliance.
  • “Nobody will even notice this issue.” – Yes, they will. If you noticed it, I can gosh-darn guarantee you that an agent, editor, or reader will.
  • “It would be easier to start over with a new novel.” – If this is the very first thing you’ve ever written, this may be true, but if you find yourself bouncing from project to project, you may be allergic to editing. No book is going to come out brilliantly conceived the first time. Every story takes a ton of work.
  • “This book is a mess and I hate it. I should quit writing.” – Never give up! Writing is a skill. It takes a lot of time and effort and learning. You don’t become an Olympic gymnast after your very first tumbling lesson, and you don’t become a published author the first time you put a story on the page.

If your thought process isn’t holding you back, you’ll know when you’re done editing when you don’t want to change anything anymore. If you go through your novel and can only think of changing a word here or there, then you’re probably finished. If something still doesn’t quite feel right, you’ve probably got more work to do.

Always remember that you’re writing because you love it, because you’re passionate about it. Never lose sight of that. Editing is a daunting task, but it’s worth it in the end. So go out and polish that book into something you can be proud of!

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I will be answering writing and editing questions on our Twitter hashtag as time allows. Due to the insane volume of emails I’m receiving, I cannot provide free advice or assistance via email. Thank you!

What is Novel Boot Camp?

Novel Boot Camp is a free online novel writing course focused on identifying and correcting problems in your novel. Learn more about Novel Boot Camp and find past (and future) posts here.

15 thoughts on “Novel Boot Camp – Lecture #19: How to Self-Edit

  1. Samuele Agostinelli says:

    Can I ask a few questions?

    Does line editing include proofreading? Or are they two different steps done in two different passes?

    A lot of people seem to edit with pen and paper. Is there any advantages for doing that over using a computer and working directly on the draft?

    • Ellen_Brock says:

      Line editing and proofreading are two different things that should not be attempted simultaneously.

      I find editing with pen and paper more tedious and time consuming, but it just depends on what you prefer.

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